The following discussion is an archived debate of the featured article nomination below. Please do not modify it. The result was: Not promoted.

Huge Ego

because everyone likes to troll him and hes a nice guy and a lot say mean things about him cause hes made some enemies in the past and i'm sure they will edit his page and change it to mean stuff. but overall hes a nice guy :] —The preceding unsigned comment was added by Huge Ego (talk contribs)

  • not a good article, and ur statements to be a featured article are ridiculous/biased.Green partyhat.png Mobbit100Talk 15:19, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Comments - Hey, articles aren't featured due to the quality of the player, but because of the quality of the article. It doesn't really matter how nice he is, that isn't going to increase the likelihood that this article is going to be featured. Anyway, this article definitely needs a lot of improvement. I'll leave some (in no way exhaustive) comments below:

  • Lead section: "He always plays in world 48. He is in the clan called "Maxed"." sounds dull, since they're of similar length. I'd recommend using a conjunction to connect them.
  • The lead section contains content that the body of the article does not contain. For example, it states the Huge Ego is in the clan "Maxed", although this info is not included anywhere in the body. The manual of style states the the lead section should only summarize the body of the article.
  • History: It states that he has played in world 28 ever since 2007, in present tense, then goes on to say that he later moved into world 48. Past tense should be used for historic events, per RSP:TENSE.
  • Achievements and goals: Avoid using currently. As of what date is this information accurate?
  • Try to use captions to clarify the relevance of some of the images to the article, per RSP:MOS#Images.
  • Images should contain alternative text using the |alt= parameter.
  • Avoid chat box images, per RSP:IMG#File quality and use in articles.
  • Any images used in the article should have an appropriate license added to them. In-game screenshots etc. are copyright Jagex and should include a fair use rationale. See RSP:IMG#Non-free files for more info.
  • I notice from the RuneTrack page that Huge Ego has had other names in the past. Some of those should be mentioned in the article. Smithing (talk | contribs) 19:44, June 25, 2013 (UTC)

Closed - No consensus to feature this article. Last edit made on June 25, 2013. Article minimum, needs a lot of improvement and could be expanded.‎ Green partyhat.png Mobbit100Talk 03:31, August 31, 2013 (UTC)

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